Re: Esta bien escrito mi abstract?
Welcome to the forum, and thank you for taking the trouble to add both versions. However, in the future, please do not post the same thing twice. Instead, go to your first post, click on EDIT, make your changes, and then click SAVE. The two posts will become separated on the list, and cause unnecessary confusion and duplication.
I don't know if a moderator can combine the two, but I will inquire.
"Eloquence is the power to translate a truth into language perfectly intelligible to the person to whom you speak." Ralph Waldo Emerson