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Discussion in '中文+方言 (Chinese)' started by Ben pan, May 6, 2014.

  1. Ben pan Senior Member

    chinese
    这是对亚里士多德目的论的传统理解。
    这是传统的对亚里士多德目的论的理解。
    哪一句更清楚?第二句更口语化。而且不够清楚?
     
  2. Skatinginbc

    Skatinginbc Senior Member

    Canada
    Mandarin 國語
    I actually had difficulty understanding the second sentence when I first read it.
    That's very interesting because 这是对它的正面评价 (which is structurally parallel to 这是对亚里士多德目的论的传统理解) sounds natural to me, but 这是正面的对它的评价 (parallel to 这是传统的对亚里士多德目的论的理解) does not.
     
  3. SuperXW

    SuperXW Senior Member

    我也支持第一句。第二句不够清楚,而我也并不觉得它「口语化」。
     
  4. Ben pan Senior Member

    chinese
    谢谢你们,我完全同意你们的说法。
     
  5. retrogradedwithwind Senior Member

    Chinese
    也许第二句可以当成病句来改
     

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