Hello, Will native Portuguese language speakers help please? I am writing some song lyrics in Portuguese, and there is a stanza that goes like this: De aqui até o seu lugar Tem aguas pesadas E pesado é o ar. How does this sound? I guess it is a bit difficult to evaluate out of context but I cannot post the full text. I know this is not a common way of using these words, but do you feel it could work in a song/poem, or does it sound completely "out of the question"? Thanks a lot in advance. I so wish for this to work..