áreas de influencia de un proyecto

airammaria

Senior Member
spanish
Buenos días a tod@s!! Tengo unas dudas sobre la traducción al inglés de este parrafito. ¿Alguien me puede decir si está bien?
"El trabajo realizado en el contexto del proyecto Ebusiness for Craft ha permitido profundizar en el conocimiento del estado de aplicación del ebusiness en las diferentes áreas de influencia del proyecto: comarca de la Ribera (España), región de la Liguria (Italia), cámara de comercio de Cottbus y Cámara de comercio de Muenster. Después de haber analizado el estado del ebusiness a través de la herramienta de benchmarking se ha llegado a la conclusión de que la realidad es bastante similar en cada uno de las regiones implicadas, aunque con algunos trazos diferenciados"

"The project Ebusiness for Craft has let us go into the ebusiness in depth and has let us know how its application statement is in the different areas of influence of this project: the Ribera region (Spain), Liguria region (Italy), the Chamber of Commerce of Cottbus and the Chamber of Commerce of Muenster. After having done an analysis about the statement of ebusiness through the benchmarking, we can conclude that the reality in every region is very similar, though there are some differences"
 
  • Jim986

    Senior Member
    New Zealand English
    Hola. Creo que está mejor así

    "The project Ebusiness for Craft has permitted in-depth knowledge of the application state of e-business in the different areas of influence of this project: the Ribera region (Spain), Liguria region (Italy), the Chamber of Commerce of Cottbus and the Chamber of Commerce of Muenster. After analysis of the state of e-business, the conclusion has been reached by use of the benchmarking tool that in the regions under study the state of e-business is pretty much the same, with a few differentiating features.

     

    airammaria

    Senior Member
    spanish
    A ver qué te parece entonces así... "After having analyse the state of e-business by the use of the benchmarking tool, we can conclude that the reality in every region is pretty much the same, with a few differentiating features"
     

    Jim986

    Senior Member
    New Zealand English
    After having analysed the state of e-business by the use of the benchmarking tool, we can conclude that the reality in every region is pretty much the same, with a few differentiating features"

    That's fine. best wishes ... jim
     
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