Ali Smith
Senior Member
Urdu - Pakistan
مرحبا
دَعْني أَنُوحُ عَلى نَفْسي وَأَنْدُبُها وَأَقْطَعُ الدَّهْرَ بِالتَّذْكِيرِ وَالحَزَنِ
دَعْ عَنْكَ عَذْلِيَ يَا مَنْ كانَ يَعْذُلُني لَوْ كُنْتَ تَعْلَمُ ما بِي كُنْتَ تَعْذِرُنِي
دَعْنِي أَسُحُّ دُموعًا لا انْقِطاعَ لَها فَهَلْ عَسَى عَبْرَةٌ مِنْهَا تُخَلِّصُني
My translation: Let me mourn myself and wail over it and pass the time by reminding (myself) and being sad. Stop criticizing me oh you who is criticizing me. If you knew what I was going through you would excuse me. Let me shed tears that do not stop. Is it possible for one of the tears to allow me to escape?
In two places the جواب الأمر is مرفوع rather than مجزوم. Is this grammatically correct?
شكرا
دَعْني أَنُوحُ عَلى نَفْسي وَأَنْدُبُها وَأَقْطَعُ الدَّهْرَ بِالتَّذْكِيرِ وَالحَزَنِ
دَعْ عَنْكَ عَذْلِيَ يَا مَنْ كانَ يَعْذُلُني لَوْ كُنْتَ تَعْلَمُ ما بِي كُنْتَ تَعْذِرُنِي
دَعْنِي أَسُحُّ دُموعًا لا انْقِطاعَ لَها فَهَلْ عَسَى عَبْرَةٌ مِنْهَا تُخَلِّصُني
My translation: Let me mourn myself and wail over it and pass the time by reminding (myself) and being sad. Stop criticizing me oh you who is criticizing me. If you knew what I was going through you would excuse me. Let me shed tears that do not stop. Is it possible for one of the tears to allow me to escape?
In two places the جواب الأمر is مرفوع rather than مجزوم. Is this grammatically correct?
شكرا