人生中人们总是在乎自己没有的，却不把自己拥有的放在心上

[dittoso]

请问这样写对吗？怎样可以写得更好一些？

人生中人们总是在乎自己没有的，却不把自己拥用的放在心上。
In life people always care about not having something,but don't take heart the value of something they have.

 

[OneStroke]

或許考慮一下這樣譯：

People always complain about what they don't have instead of cherishing what they do have.

 

[xiaolijie]

It's a common thought, so there are many ways of expressing it. Here is another:
People care too much about what they don't have, and not enough about what they do.

 

[dittoso]

Oh, I got it !!!!
Thank you very much