12% higher energy efficiency

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HAHAHA123

New Member
Korean
'Our product has 12% higher energy efficiency and 11% lower power consumption compared to its competing procuts.'
I am not sure whether my sentence is correct, can anyone check the sentence?
 
  • Florentia52

    Modwoman in the attic
    English - United States
    We can't proofread or correct entire sentences here. Do you have a specific question about one of the words or phrases in your sentence?
     

    Pertinax

    Senior Member
    BrE->AuE
    I personally would write it as "12% higher energy-efficiency" to make it clearer, but then I am a compulsive hyphenator. It would be more common to write it unhyphenated, ugly as it is.
     
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