I'm a teacher and my students made up a story about ancient Egypt. One of my students wrote:
[.. .] they went inside of the house. There were a lot of pictures and treasures [...]. Ramses opened a door and there was a big plan to kill a big wolf. Ramses said, "Read the plan [...] ."
I somehow do not like the highlighted phrase. I don't think plan should be used in this context. Or would you accept it? My suggestion is:
...there was a big book on how to kill a big wolf. Ramses said, "Read the book... ."
[.. .] they went inside of the house. There were a lot of pictures and treasures [...]. Ramses opened a door and there was a big plan to kill a big wolf. Ramses said, "Read the plan [...] ."
I somehow do not like the highlighted phrase. I don't think plan should be used in this context. Or would you accept it? My suggestion is:
...there was a big book on how to kill a big wolf. Ramses said, "Read the book... ."