A black cat crosses my path

[tennisgirl120789]

I need to write a Halloween poem in French and am not sure what verb to use for cross. Traverser ou croiser? Also, how would I say "my path"?

 

[tennisgirl120789]

Does this part of the poem make sense? I'm trying to say that a ghost creeps up on me.

Un fantome approche moi à pas de loup.

 

[zaby]

I need to write a Halloween poem in French and am not sure what verb to use for cross. Traverser ou croiser? Also, how would I say "my path"?

A black cat crosses my path : Un chat noir a croisé mon chemin

Does this part of the poem make sense? I'm trying to say that a ghost creeps up on me.

Un fantome approche moi à pas de loup

Un fantome approche de moi à pas de loup

 

[tennisgirl120789]

thanks for your help.