A cascade of pearls pouring into a blue velvet pool.

virgyvirgy

Member
Italian
A man is giving his girlfriend a jewel. I'd want to say in English:

"he opened the box, revealing a cascade of pearls pouring into a blue velvet pool"


Is this statement correct ?
Thanks in advance
 
  • Florentia52

    Modwoman in the attic
    English - United States
    We can’t proofread entire sentences here, but we’ll be happy to help if you have a specific question about a word or phrase in it.
     
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