A cascade of pearls pouring into a blue velvet pool.

Discussion in 'English Only' started by virgyvirgy, Jul 31, 2018.

  1. virgyvirgy

    virgyvirgy Member

    Italy
    Italian
    A man is giving his girlfriend a jewel. I'd want to say in English:

    "he opened the box, revealing a cascade of pearls pouring into a blue velvet pool"


    Is this statement correct ?
    Thanks in advance
     
  2. Florentia52

    Florentia52 Modwoman in the attic

    Wisconsin
    English - United States
    We can’t proofread entire sentences here, but we’ll be happy to help if you have a specific question about a word or phrase in it.
     

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