a change in hotel accommodation

bosun

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korean
Is the following sentence is correct?

In reply to your letter requesting a change in hotel accommodation( or booking) and arranging transportation to pick you up from the airport, I am happy to inform you the following.
 
  • Porteño

    Member Emeritus
    British English
    Is the following sentence is correct?

    I would suggest the following modifications;

    In reply to your letter requesting a change in hotel accommodation (or booking) and transportation arrangements to pick you up from the airport, I am happy to advise you as follows
    There is one other matter which should be made clearer. A change in hotel accommodation would sound to me like a change of room, e.g. from a single to a double, whereas a change in booking would relate to the dates. In this sense 'accommodation' and 'booking' are not synonymous.
     
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