a decision over which he and my grandfather had a huge argument

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jesusguime

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My father decided to close his company, a decision over which he and my grandfather had a huge argument.


Hi,
Is it better to delete "a decision" in the above or keep it? (I feel like to delete it) Thanks.
 
  • baker589

    Senior Member
    English - England
    I would keep it, if I were keeping the 'over which' part. I'm still not entirely satified with it (although it is correct), so here is my suggestion

    My Father decided to close his company; a decision which caused a huge arguement between him and my Grandfather.
     
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