a deep voice growled from the opposite corner

Discussion in 'Spanish-English Vocabulary / Vocabulario Español-Inglés' started by SophieLOL, Dec 5, 2009.

  1. SophieLOL Banned

    Spanish
    Hi, i have a question.
    In this text;

    "So, you were peacefully sleeping in your bedroom, when suddenly a shadow slipped through the door... And as it began approaching you, a deep voice growled from the opposite corner; "what the hell do you think you're doing..??"

    Do you understand that there were 3 people in one room, one sleeping, the other entering through the door, and the 3rd one standing in the opposite corner? Or is it a little bit confusing? if so, how can i edit it?
    Thanks in advance.
     
  2. Valeria Mesalina

    Valeria Mesalina Senior Member

    Santiago de Compostela
    Spanish, Spain
    No.

    What I understand is that there is one person inside the room, a shadow is entering the room and a voice is growling somewhere around the corner.

    A shadow is a shadow: ghost, vampire, ghoul, poltergeist, alien. And a voice is just a voice: cell phone, recording machine, telly, microphone.
     

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