a story about making a bomb

Doc J

Senior Member
U. S. English
Hello everyone,
Please tell me if haciendo una bomba is correct in the following example. Many thanks.

If Wally tells Eugenio a big story about making a bomb in his garage, Eugenio will not believe him.

Si Wally le dice a Eugenio una gran historia sobre haciendo una bomba en su garaje, Eugenio no lo creerá.
 
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  • nangueyra

    Senior Member
    Castellano-Argentina
    Hello everyone,
    Please tell me if haciendo una bomba is correct in the following example. Many thanks.

    If Wally tells Eugenio a big story about making a bomb in his garage, Eugenio will not believe him.

    Si Wally le dice a Eugenio una gran historia sobre que está haciendo una bomba en su garaje, Eugenio no lo creerá.
     

    ACQM

    Senior Member
    Spain - Spanish
    It's not correct for two reasons, the verb and its form:"fabricar/montar una bomba". But still the sentence is weird. Try:

    Si Wally le explica a Eugenio el cuento demencial de que ha fabricado una bomba en su garaje, Eugenio no se lo creerá.

    Si Wally le va a Eugenio con el cuento imposible de que está fabricando/ha fabricado una bomba en el garaje de su casa, Eugenio no se lo tragará.
     
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