a story about making a bomb

[Doc J]

Hello everyone,
Please tell me if haciendo una bomba is correct in the following example. Many thanks.

If Wally tells Eugenio a big story about making a bomb in his garage, Eugenio will not believe him.

Si Wally le dice a Eugenio una gran historia sobre haciendo una bomba en su garaje, Eugenio no lo creerá.

 

[nangueyra]

Hello everyone,
Please tell me if haciendo una bomba is correct in the following example. Many thanks.

If Wally tells Eugenio a big story about making a bomb in his garage, Eugenio will not believe him.

Si Wally le dice a Eugenio una gran historia sobre que está haciendo una bomba en su garaje, Eugenio no lo creerá.

 

[ACQM]

It's not correct for two reasons, the verb and its form:"fabricar/montar una bomba". But still the sentence is weird. Try:

Si Wally le explica a Eugenio el cuento demencial de que ha fabricado una bomba en su garaje, Eugenio no se lo creerá.

Si Wally le va a Eugenio con el cuento imposible de que está fabricando/ha fabricado una bomba en el garaje de su casa, Eugenio no se lo tragará.

 

[Doc J]

Thanks, ACQM. That is exactly what I wanted to know.