All at once he stood up and headed off toward one corner of the room.
'Now where are you planning on going?'
His answer was to let out e burp, which I considered a very well-spoken reply because it was apparent he was about the throw up.
My attempt: La sua risposta fu emettere un rutto, che considerai una risposta davvero eloquente dato che era evidente fosse in procinto di vomitare.
Is my attempt correct? Even if I found the hilarious sense of the sentence the 'because' of the second period make me doubt it means something different.
'Now where are you planning on going?'
His answer was to let out e burp, which I considered a very well-spoken reply because it was apparent he was about the throw up.
My attempt: La sua risposta fu emettere un rutto, che considerai una risposta davvero eloquente dato che era evidente fosse in procinto di vomitare.
Is my attempt correct? Even if I found the hilarious sense of the sentence the 'because' of the second period make me doubt it means something different.