about celebrating who you are and to be proud

SuprunP

Senior Member
Ukrainian & Russian
These stories contain common messages about accepting and celebrating who you are and to be proud of your differences.
(The Strength of Self-Acceptance; M.E. Bernard)

Would you be so kind as to tell me whether it works for you?

Thanks.
 
  • dojibear

    Senior Member
    English - Northeast US
    There is a mismatch between "accepting", "celebrating" and "to be proud". All three should be "-ing" forms or "to" forms.

    The "messages about" part applies to both parts following, and

    "messages about to be proud of your differences" is not grammatical.
     
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