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tonkinka

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slovak
Hello everybody,

I´ve been translating the abstract for a diploma thesis and I have a sentence like this: "The aim of this diploma thesis was to find and point to the possibilities of innovative changes concerning products, machines, or rather, equipment, organizational processes and marketing in a factory producing wood and processing wood substance."
I need to insert the information that the factory was chosen by him (the guy I´ve been translating the abstract for). Do you have any suggestions how the sentence can look like?

P.S. - if you have any objections regarding the sentence itself (grammatical mistakes or if it doesn´t sound English-like) please feel free to make it better.

Thank you very much in advance
 
  • tonkinka

    Member
    slovak
    All right then, I was afraid that I´ve posted an inappropriate thread.. :) Thank you very much one more time! :)
     
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