according to how serious

gigilafrancha

Senior Member
french
hi, could you tell me if that sounds all right:

they receive such treatment according to how serious their constipation is.

thainks a lot...the context if someone wants to know is constipation treatment and a GP is speaking
 
  • vachecow

    Senior Member
    USA English
    I think that works, but I think you get rid of "such". Such refers to a single treatment that was mentioned before, and the rest of the sentence implies that there are various treatments.
     

    panjandrum

    Occasional Moderator
    English-Ireland (top end)
    hi, could you tell me if that sounds all right:

    they receive such treatment according to how serious their constipation is.

    thainks a lot...the context if someone wants to know is constipation treatment and a GP is speaking.
    They receive treatment according to the severity of their constipation.

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