Hi,
the sentence below was written by me. I'm wondering if the part in bold looks natural inserted between '... in April 2016' and 'the main part of the sentence? Or maybe there are too many commas?
According to media reports in April 2016, in a settlement with the New York State Public Service Commission, XYZ agreed to pay USD 171 million to its customers to settle allegations of bribery and kickback schemes in the United States.
the sentence below was written by me. I'm wondering if the part in bold looks natural inserted between '... in April 2016' and 'the main part of the sentence? Or maybe there are too many commas?
According to media reports in April 2016, in a settlement with the New York State Public Service Commission, XYZ agreed to pay USD 171 million to its customers to settle allegations of bribery and kickback schemes in the United States.