according to

jacki221

Member
Korean
Hi~!
I've got to come up with my thesis title and it's a little hard to make;;;

Title: An Analysis of Handicapped Students' Interactions According to Different Types of Group
In Middle Shcool Inclusive Science Classroom.

English is not my mother language so I'm not sure but 'according to' part doesn't sound right...
Is there any other suitable expression for that?
Thanks a lot in advance:)
 
  • Procol

    Senior Member
    British English
    Hi
    Nothing wrong with "according to", but I find the end of the sentence a little awkward (watch out for the spelling of "school"). I think you need an article... "In a Middle School Inclusive Science Classroom".... Not quite sure what that means, though... :)
     
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