Adequate use of connectors

isabel...

Senior Member
Spanish
Hi, can somebody tell me if this paragraph makes sense (using these conectors)or if it is too long?

Ever since Supervisory Board for Private Investment in Telecommuncations (OSIPTEL) was established fourteen years ago, it was assigned the primary task of standardizing and regulating public telecomunication services, so that operating companies offer an efficient and quality service, that at the same time guarantee that a greater amount of users access to them under the best conditions.

Thanks in advance
 
  • Copyright

    Senior Member
    American English
    We don't proofread (Rule) but I'll tell you that starting with "Since" and replacing "so that" with "to ensure that" would help.
     
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