after being proposed and accepted by my senior managers

felixxxx

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I would like to ask you if the expression after being proposed and accepted by my senior managers is correct in the following sentence:
For example, the study of X suggested me a different “approach” which, after being proposed and accepted by my senior managers, was successfully employed in the manufacturing of some products with significant reduction of operating costs .
 
  • JamesM

    Senior Member
    I don't think it is incorrect but it is a little unclear. It can be interpreted as the senior managers both proposed and accepted the approach. :eek:

    How about "For example, the study of X suggested to me a different “approach” which I proposed to my senior managers. It was successfully employed in the manufacturing of some products with significant reduction of operating costs."
     
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