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Farmer’s Ali
A long a long time ago an orphan called Ali. When he was three years old his mother married someone from anther village. As result, his mother gave him to his uncle. While Ali became nine years his uncle was very hard with him. He had farms and animals he made Ali as worker in the farms and shepherd. Ali spent much time in this case and he lived very hard life. His uncle used to hit him and send outside house.
His uncle and some of relatives used to travel to makkah, Jeddah and Riyadh for trade, but Ali was stayed in the village with the farm and animals.
When Ali became adult, he married A girl from the same village. Her name was Monerah afterward he had three daughters. In the same time he moved to kames Mashete in the south of Saudi Arabia for working in a British Company working for Saudi Air Forces.
After A year, he had a son. An important change for this family happened. Ali's Uncle and some relatives were worried for the coming the boy because Ali share them farms and animals. So they decided not to give him any thing. Furthermore, they send the family out without anything just their clothes.
As result, Ali left his job and came back to his family and moved to his wife's family and lived with them for sometimes. A lot of people were very sad about Ali after he spent those years with his uncle as worker. He started building his house in a deserted place. Then he got a job in Electric Saudi Company.
Subsequently, Ali had a big house and with a family consists of daughters and boys. He also forgave his uncle, and he didn't forget what happened in the past. Now Ali became old and his house and his sons are employees in high jobs at the government and the daughters married, BUT his wife passed away.
Farmer’s Ali
A long a long time ago an orphan called Ali. When he was three years old his mother married someone from anther village. As result, his mother gave him to his uncle. While Ali became nine years his uncle was very hard with him. He had farms and animals he made Ali as worker in the farms and shepherd. Ali spent much time in this case and he lived very hard life. His uncle used to hit him and send outside house.
His uncle and some of relatives used to travel to makkah, Jeddah and Riyadh for trade, but Ali was stayed in the village with the farm and animals.
When Ali became adult, he married A girl from the same village. Her name was Monerah afterward he had three daughters. In the same time he moved to kames Mashete in the south of Saudi Arabia for working in a British Company working for Saudi Air Forces.
After A year, he had a son. An important change for this family happened. Ali's Uncle and some relatives were worried for the coming the boy because Ali share them farms and animals. So they decided not to give him any thing. Furthermore, they send the family out without anything just their clothes.
As result, Ali left his job and came back to his family and moved to his wife's family and lived with them for sometimes. A lot of people were very sad about Ali after he spent those years with his uncle as worker. He started building his house in a deserted place. Then he got a job in Electric Saudi Company.
Subsequently, Ali had a big house and with a family consists of daughters and boys. He also forgave his uncle, and he didn't forget what happened in the past. Now Ali became old and his house and his sons are employees in high jobs at the government and the daughters married, BUT his wife passed away.
