All these elements combined help to produce a cartoonlike feel to the film

loughtenty

Member
UK, English
Does this phrase read well as a translation of the Engish 'All these elements combined help to produce a cartoonlike feeling to the film'? I have a feeling that is probably doesnt!

Tous ces éléments parviennent a réaliser le style d'un film d'animation

It doesn't seem to flow so well when i read it out aloud...

Thanx for any suggestions!

context = Amelie (the colourful, quirky narration etc)
 
  • LV4-26

    Senior Member
    Deux propositions....à voir :confused:

    Autant d'éléments qui contribuent à rapprocher ce film d'un dessin animé.(provided the previous sentence makes it possible).
    Tous ces éléments réunis contribuent à donner à ce film un faux air de dessin animé.
     
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