along with

Vicky_D

Senior Member
chinois
Hi,
I'm not sure if I fully understand this sentence:
"Along with reading comprehension comes a stronger self-discipline, longer attention span, and better memory retention, all of which will serve a child well when he/she enters school."


So, could I put it in this way: Reading comprehension comes a stronger self-discipline, longer attention span, along with better memory retention, all of which will serve a child well when he/she enters school. ?

Thanks for your help!
 
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