. . .although a bowl of hot chili or hot soup always tastes better after a brisk walk in the winter.

Discussion in 'English Only' started by Cholo234, Dec 23, 2018.

  1. Cholo234

    Cholo234 Senior Member

    United States
    American English
    <<When the weather is cold, as it is now, it's easier for me to write, because the incentive to go outside is somewhat reduced -- although a bowl of hot chili or hot soup always tastes better after a brisk walk in the winter.>>

    What I'm trying to say is that despite the fact that a bowl of hot chili tastes better after a walk outside, the incentive to stay inside in winter and write is still a little bit greater than the incentive to go outside (and take a walk). Is the subject sentence okay as it is written?
     
  2. RM1(SS)

    RM1(SS) Senior Member

    Connecticut
    English - US (Midwest)
    Yes, it is.

    And I wholeheartedly agree.
     
  3. Cholo234

    Cholo234 Senior Member

    United States
    American English
    Thank you RM1(SS).
     

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