...an interesting, and perhaps titillating, item for the blog.

moonglow

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Comma after "titillating" below?

I think it would make an interesting, and perhaps titillating, item for the blog.

I think it's better with no commas at all:

I think it would make an interesting and perhaps titillating item for the blog.
 
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