An introduction

ray8838

Senior Member
Chinese--Hong Kong
If I am a newcomer of a company and would like to write all co-workers a letter to introduce myself, can I write the opening in this way?

Dear all,

My name is ray and is the new Sales Executive of Marketing Dept.................Or

I am Ray and is the new Sales Executive of Marketing Dept.


Is the latter one not natural in the eyes of native??
 
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