and generally in adulthood

erroranalysis

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A student wrote:

Hence students have more time for themselves as they have already done ecverything encessary. The all-day school system actively improves the students' awareness of time, which is crucuial in college, in jobs, and generally in adulthood.

Would you leave the highlighted phrase as it is or would you say:

...and in adulthood in general?
 
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