And so impenetrable and secret is the end

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annesclass

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French - France
Hi everyone,

it's all in the title, can we use this structure "And so impenetrable and secret is the end", is the inversion acceptable or does it sound weird to you? And doesn't "secret" sound funny collocated with the end? What would you replace it with?

Thanks a lot!

Anne
 
  • annesclass

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    French - France
    I'm sorry, this is what my student wrote :

    But after he has taken her back to the station, the camera shows us a little while his thoughtful blank face in his car after he left her alone. And so impenetrable and secret is the end.
    So this is the whole sentence.

    Thanks for getting back to me so quickly :)
     
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