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nuruemp

Member
Spain, Spanish
Hello all, is there any mistake in this notice? Thanks

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POETRY CLASSES START!


A LIST WITH THE TIMETABLE WILL BE HANDED OUT DURING THE CLASS SO YOU CAN JOIN.

Please write down your full name and the hour of your choice.
 
  • GenJen54

    Senior Member
    USA - English
    I think it looks fine. The only thing I might add would be a reference to when the classes will begin:

    POETRY CLASSES BEGIN NEXT WEEK! (MONTH/YEAR), or
    POETRY CLASSES START OCTOBER 27th
     

    Gordonedi

    Senior Member
    UK (Scotland) English
    The notice looks fine to me, too.

    In the small print at the bottom do you mean the "hour of your choice" as in 60 minutes ? Or perhaps do you mean the "time" you would prefer ? If you do change the word to "time", then you could write instead "... and your choice of time". :)
     

    whatonearth

    Senior Member
    UK, English
    nuruemp said:
    Hello all, is there any mistake in this notice? Thanks

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    POETRY CLASSES START!


    A LIST WITH THE TIMETABLE WILL BE HANDED OUT DURING THE CLASS SO YOU CAN JOIN.

    Please write down your full name and the hour of your choice.
    Just to be pedantic, I would probably reword it a little bit:

    (As said before) Poetry Classes start (day, month)!

    The timetable will be handed out in class for those who want to sign-up (if it's voluntary)

    Please write down your full name and choose an hour that's suitable for you

    That's just my personal opinion, it looks fine as it is though! :thumbsup:
     
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