apologize

ssisisun

New Member
chinese-china
I am new in a company, I didn't know every staff has his/her own mugs, although there is a message on the cupboard door, so I used different mugs every day. A lady told me this at lunch time today. I want to write a sorry card, this is draft: Hi friends, I am the person who used your mugs as spare ones, thank you for your generous and kindness. I am so sorry for my carelessness. This is my little treat, please feel free.
 
  • natkretep

    Moderato con anima (English Only)
    English (Singapore/UK), basic Chinese
    Welcome to the Forum, ssisisun! :)

    As it stands, your opening post sounds like a request to proofread your message. This is not what we do here. If, however, there is something specific that you are concerned about, we can discuss it here. Is there a specific question?
     

    ssisisun

    New Member
    chinese-china
    Hi natkretep, thank you for reply. English is my second language, sometimes I don't know if my message is properly, that is my question.
     

    Biffo

    Senior Member
    English - England
    "generous" should be "generosity".

    A card is not a treat. Are you planning for there to be a present to go along with the card?

    "Please feel free." Feel free to do what?
     

    ssisisun

    New Member
    chinese-china
    "generous" should be "generosity".

    A card is not a treat. Are you planning for there to be a present to go along with the card?

    "Please feel free." Feel free to do what?
    Thank you. I have changed "feel free to eat"--cookies
     
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