As a comedian, he began performing on radio and on stage

i would like to translate the above or something along those lines for example 'He began performing comedy on the radio and the stage' , but i don't think my translation is gramatically correct...

他开始在电台和舞台上的表演喜剧 or 他开始在电台和舞台上表演


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  • wkwrd

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    Chinese (Traditional) - Mandarin
    both are grammatically correct
    to me, the latter is better from the context...I'd go with something like this: "做为一个喜剧演员,他开始在电台和舞台上表演"
     
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