As sprays by the white breakers flung

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Daffodil100

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Could you paraphrase the sentence I highligh in blue for me? I am especially baffled by 'the white breakers'.


This is an excerpt from the Scottish song - When You and I were young, Maggie.
http://www.rampantscotland.com/songs/blsongs_young.htm

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They say we are agèd and grey, Maggie,
As sprays by the white breakers flung,
But to me you're as fair as you were, Maggie,
When you and I were young.
Chorus
 
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  • St. Nick

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    English
    Like the spray that is blown into the air from white churning waters of breaking ocean waves.
     

    Daffodil100

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    Chinese
    What's the link between this verse and the others in this stanza? It sounds abrupt to me. Could you interpret further, St. Nick? Thank you!
     

    teksch

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    English - American
    What's the link between this verse and the others in this stanza? It sounds abrupt to me. Could you interpret further, St. Nick? Thank you!
    When you and I were young.
    While I am not a poet I will attempt to clarify this for you. The author writes a line and then writes another line to illustrate the previous line.

    They say we are aged and grey, Maggie
    --Others say that we are old--

    As spray by the white breakers flung
    --We are similar to the spray that is thrown from waves of water when they hit the beach. When a wave hits the rocks or the shore, the water is diffused into a spray. Since this song was written in Scotland and there are many cloudy or overcast days in Scotland, the spray, or mist, would take on an appearance of being gray.--

    (The line “As spray…” is called a simile. A Simile is a figure of speech where one thing is compared to something else. Similes use words “as” or “like”. For example, "My love's like a red, red rose.")

    But to me you’re as fair as you were, Maggie
    --You are as beautiful now as when you were younger –

    The “link” between the lines is the comparison between how others perceive them today and how the writer sees Maggie today.

    Even though others see us as old, I see you as young and beautiful as you were when we were both young.
     

    Daffodil100

    Senior Member
    Chinese
    When you and I were young.
    While I am not a poet I will attempt to clarify this for you. The author writes a line and then writes another line to illustrate the previous line.

    They say we are aged and grey, Maggie
    --Others say that we are old--

    As spray by the white breakers flung
    --We are similar to the spray that is thrown from waves of water when they hit the beach. When a wave hits the rocks or the shore, the water is diffused into a spray. Since this song was written in Scotland and there are many cloudy or overcast days in Scotland, the spray, or mist, would take on an appearance of being gray.--

    (The line “As spray…” is called a simile. A Simile is a figure of speech where one thing is compared to something else. Similes use words “as” or “like”. For example, "My love's like a red, red rose.")

    But to me you’re as fair as you were, Maggie
    --You are as beautiful now as when you were younger –

    The “link” between the lines is the comparison between how others perceive them today and how the writer sees Maggie today.

    Even though others see us as old, I see you as young and beautiful as you were when we were both young.
    Thank you very much for take time to analyse this greatly for me.

    Have a good day.:)
     
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