At the top of... there was a wonderful view.

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erroranalysis

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One student wrote:

Those 25 minutes on the London Eye were fantastic. At the top of the London Eye there was a wonderful view. Next, we went to Tower Bridge...

Would you leave the highlighted part as it is or would you say:

From the top of the London Eye we had a wonderful view....
 
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