attributed to the last campaign, in particular <to> the B advertisement

atakeris

Senior Member
Latvian
Hello,

The increase in sales can be attributed to the last campaign, in particular <to> the B advertisement.

Is 'to' necessary here? Are the any other alternative phrases that you use to add more details (for some reason, I don't like 'in particular" and "specifically')?
 
  • owlman5

    Senior Member
    English-US
    Hello. I don't think you need to repeat "to" if you don't want to. However, the word is short and it doesn't do any harm.;)

    You might consider "especially", but you probably won't like that word either.
     
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