Hi, I am writing a paper for the Novel course, and I am afraid that the structure of some sentences is awkward or incoorect. Please read them if you have time and tell me if the sentences are correct, or if they can be written in a better form.
the first sentence is:
(The marriage of Charlotte Lucas and Mr. Collins is a negative portrait of a marriage that is not built on the elements which Jane Austen considers to be necessary for a successful marriage)
the second sentence is:
(Mr. Bennet's use of irony is significant since it underlines his loss of respect for his wife which results from the difference and inequality between the characters of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet.)
the first sentence is:
(The marriage of Charlotte Lucas and Mr. Collins is a negative portrait of a marriage that is not built on the elements which Jane Austen considers to be necessary for a successful marriage)
the second sentence is:
(Mr. Bennet's use of irony is significant since it underlines his loss of respect for his wife which results from the difference and inequality between the characters of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet.)