bénéficier (marketing)

Adidi

Senior Member
France
Hello,

can you tell me if this sentence is correct?

They offer an output of up to 85%!

(pour dire : "Bénéficiez d'un rendement jusqu'à 85%")

Ne corrigez pas le style mais juste l'ordre des mots et la traduction de "bénéficiez".

Merci :)
 
  • Kelly B

    Senior Member
    USA English
    You've shifted the point of view, but I think the meaning is consistent, yes.
    "Offering" might sound better, instead of referring to "they." In this case, it would mean that the product or service offers (is offering) that profit or return.
     
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