besides the writers I have discussed, it should not be ...

boggiee

Senior Member
Turkish
Hi,

- Besides the writers I have discussed, it should not be forgotten that there was another dramatist...

- It should not be forgotten that besides the writers I have discussed, there was another dramatist...

I tried to make up two senteces, but I have difficulty in deciding where to put 'it should not be forgotten that' in that sentence. I think both are OK, but I cannot figure out which one is better.

Thanks.
 
  • owlman5

    Senior Member
    English-US
    Hi, Boggiee.

    I think you would do well to drop "it should not be forgotten" from that sentence. You don't have to omit the idea, but the phrase looks a little awkward to me in the sentence. Here is one way to keep the idea without disrupting the flow of your sentence: Besides the writers I have discussed, there was another dramatist whom we should not forget...
     
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