building up

[ariosto byron]

Hi everybody.

I would like to know if "build up" would work in the following context:

Building up cultural landscapes for the Tory imaginary: the case of Moorfields and Bethlem Hospital

Thank you very much in advance.

 

[Beryl from Northallerton]

This bit works well: "Building up cultural landscapes for the Tory..." it breaks down after that.


p.s. we don't do re-writes.

 

[ariosto byron]

Do you mean that the second part of the title ( the one after the colon) does not work? Why?

 

[Beryl from Northallerton]

Do you mean that the second part of the title ( the one after the colon) does not work? Why?

You should start a new thread, or this turns into a re-write.

 

[ariosto byron]

Sorry about that. Thanks for your help.