changes required for/of your essay

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EdisonBhola

Senior Member
Korean
Hi all, if I were writing an email to someone requesting him to change something in his essay, should I write the subject line below using "for" or "of"?

Changes required for/of your essay

My gut feeling tells me to use "for", but I'd like to confirm.

Many thanks! :)
 
  • suzi br

    Senior Member
    English / England
    Yes, I agree - "to" is better.
    Yes, but note: I changed the whole thing. I didn't like the "are required" thing, which forces us into a passive construction, I have chosen an active verb. In the original phrasing I agree with you, Barque, that "in" is probably the best option.
     
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