Hi, I'm writing the lyrics for an easy-listening song. I used the word "cheeriness" because it fits well in the metrics, but as I've never seen it used, so I have the doubt that it may sound weird or old-fashioned for native speakers.
The song line goes like this:
"And we'll find our happiness, cheeriness, no more time for loneliness...."
Does it sound ok for you? Thanks for your help
The song line goes like this:
"And we'll find our happiness, cheeriness, no more time for loneliness...."
Does it sound ok for you? Thanks for your help