...Chief Priest, Reverend Shotsu Nomura, so that we can...

Karen123456

Senior Member
Malaysia English
Let us single-mindedly work together with our guiding master, Chief Priest --- Reverend Shotsu Nomura -- so that we can convert many people..

1. Is the comma needed after master?
2. Is the sentence OK?

Thanks.
 
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  • Myridon

    Senior Member
    English - US
    We need some context on how the name is formed. Is "Chief Priest Reverend" one title or two? Is "chief priest" not a title but a job description for Reverend Shotsu Nomura?
     
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