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Chocolatchaud

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UK, English
Hello!

I'm writing a formal letter to a French bank to organise the closure of an account. I want to say:

"The account should have been closed in June 2007 when he left France."


The best I've come up with is this, but I'm not sure it's right:

"La clôture de ce compte aurait dû coïncider avec son départ de la France en juin 2007."
 
  • Chocolatchaud

    Member
    UK, English
    Thanks - I did think it was rather wordy! I wrote it that way because a francophone friend told me that French formal letters use a lot of nouns...
     
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