Sextus said:"We see that in both passages Sextus makes use of the verb ...., avoiding in this way any assertion that there is, or there is not, a causal link between epoche and ataraxia."
Would you take out the commas in ", or there is not,"
Sextus said:Yeah, I could perhaps say:
"avoiding in this way any assertion about the relationship between epoche and ataraxia".
By the way, it seems to me that you don't like the "in this way", do you?
DAH said:thereby avoiding assertions as to the connection beween epoche and ataraxia