Rabelaisian
Senior Member
English - Canadian
Source: me
He pounded against it with all his superhuman, vampire strength, so hard that the echo reverberated off the walls.
Is it wrong to put that comma after "superhuman" to emphasize "vampire" being used adjectivally in describing the strength, or should "vampire strength" be made a head noun?
Thanks.
He pounded against it with all his superhuman, vampire strength, so hard that the echo reverberated off the walls.
Is it wrong to put that comma after "superhuman" to emphasize "vampire" being used adjectivally in describing the strength, or should "vampire strength" be made a head noun?
Thanks.