HelloImAPersonJustLikeYou
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Im helping a friend with cover letter to apply for a job. Does this paragraph have correct punctuation with fullstops or should we be using commas for what is a list? thanks
In brief since achieving an AVCE in Business Studies I have worked in various roles. In customer service at supervisory level. As a community support worker for a large agency. On a voluntary basis as an advisor and social policy worker at the Citizens Advice Bureau. In a busy Accident & Emergency department for over 5 years and as an Appointments Officer within the District Hospital for over 6 years.
In brief since achieving an AVCE in Business Studies I have worked in various roles. In customer service at supervisory level. As a community support worker for a large agency. On a voluntary basis as an advisor and social policy worker at the Citizens Advice Bureau. In a busy Accident & Emergency department for over 5 years and as an Appointments Officer within the District Hospital for over 6 years.