"The breeze wasn’t very refreshing; they were in the Forbidden Place after all, but it was definitely what she needed."
Is that sentence correct?
What I got bold is the sentence I had originally. I wanted to intersect that little fragment there, but I'm not sure how. I can't put a semicolon right before 'but', but the already placed semicolon indicates the rest is part of that next sentence rather than the original one, right?
In other words, this:
"The breeze wasn’t very refreshing; they were in the Forbidden Place after all; but it was definitely what she needed."
...Is not correct, right?
Then, should I not place everything together in a sentence and just separate them using periods?
Sorry if it sounds confusing ><
Thanks for the help.
Is that sentence correct?
What I got bold is the sentence I had originally. I wanted to intersect that little fragment there, but I'm not sure how. I can't put a semicolon right before 'but', but the already placed semicolon indicates the rest is part of that next sentence rather than the original one, right?
In other words, this:
"The breeze wasn’t very refreshing; they were in the Forbidden Place after all; but it was definitely what she needed."
...Is not correct, right?
Then, should I not place everything together in a sentence and just separate them using periods?
Sorry if it sounds confusing ><
Thanks for the help.