comma with adjective: and traditional, monarchical forms of

[rubes1]

When would one use a comma in between adjectives (meaning when you are using more than one adjective)? Which of the cases below actually warrant a comma? I am not so sure. Would the use or removal of the comma change the meaning or emphasis as well? I would like to know the rule please.

The region remains divided between nationalist-military dictatorships of varying degrees of severity, and traditional, monarchical forms of government...

The regime is beset by deep-set, structural problems...

Neither of these forms of governance has succeeded in developing successful, advanced economies or educated, mobile societies.

Thank you!

 

[emma42]

As far as I'm concerned, if a comma is not used between traditional and monarchical, then traditional is describing or qualifying monarchical. So you will be describing a traditional monarchy (rather than any other kind). If the comma is used, then you are using two unrelated (grammatically) adjectives: You are describing a form of government that is both traditional (in many ways other than just having a monarchy) and monarchical.

 

[rubes1]

Thank you. That being the case, the comma is not necessary in the other two examples:

The regime is beset by deep-set, structural problems...

Neither of these forms of governance has succeeded in developing successful, advanced economies or educated, mobile societies.

Are you in agreement with that?

Thanks once again!

 

[emma42]

If the structural problems themselves are deepset then, no, you don't need the comma.

I think you do need the commas in the second sentence because each adjective stands alone.

I should point out that I am not the best grammarian and I really don't want to give you the wrong information. It is possible that someone else might disagree with me. I think I am right, though!

 

[Capri]

I think a good rule of thumb here is to read your sentences out loud. Wherever your voice adds a pause is usually where the commas belong.

 

[rubes1]

Thank you for your help Emma & Capri!