karlosfabricius
New Member
UK, English
Am i right in putting the comma after "...family around you" and before "to relaxing..."?
From swimming with dolphins, climbing the Alps, or skydiving out of a plane with all your friends and family around you, to relaxing under a palm tree or simply enjoying a meal
Am i right in putting the comma after "...family around you" and before "to relaxing..."?
From swimming with dolphins to skydiving out of a plane with your family and friendsaround; from climbing the Alps to __________ ; from relaxing under a palm tree to simply enjoying a great meal...